Water Birth

When sixteen-year-old Lor becomes the world’s first true mermaid, she fulfills a prophecy as old as the oceans and gains the power to choose if humans or Mer will survive to tend the Earth.

READ CHAPTER 1. CHAPTER 2. CHAPTER 3. CHAPTER 4. CHAPTER 7.

14 thoughts on “Water Birth

  1. Nicole Johnston says:

    The evolution of this story has been amazing and inspiring to read. I love how quickly I am transported to the lake on that fateful day and how deep my concern for Lor is from the start. Young adult readers will be captivated. Well done!

    • You’ve been my constant reader from the start. Thanks so much.

      • min dahn says:

        this is a terrific piece — skillful language — unique theme — beautiful and powerful imagery — haunting energy — tapping into the great mystery of the deep inner and outer oceanic experience — kudos and love madhi

  2. Sarah says:

    This is great! I love the way you describe the cold. That’s exactly how cold Midwest wind feels when it gnaws on my Floridian bones. So real I made a mental note to find my silk long underwear and legwarmers ASAP. I can’t wait to read the rest. Can I buy a signed copy?

  3. Matt Pavich says:

    Great stuff, Dot. Very compelling!

  4. Lisa Reilly says:

    Very good stuff here, I can’t wait to purchase when it’s published! Did you realize that you are opening the door to an ENTIRELY NEW genre?!? It takes a lot of grit to do that, and as a very avid reader I’m ready for it!

  5. Stefanie says:

    I’m so looking forward to reading the whole book.

  6. ursula says:

    Who did your image? I think it is great. It really looks like she is in the water.

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